{"id":20,"date":"2013-03-31T04:36:40","date_gmt":"2013-03-31T03:36:40","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.lescribe.ca\/?page_id=20"},"modified":"2013-08-05T00:29:05","modified_gmt":"2013-08-04T23:29:05","slug":"redaction","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/www.lescribe.ca\/?page_id=20","title":{"rendered":"R\u00e9daction"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Des paragraphes structur\u00e9s facilitent la lecture.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 \u00c9crire les mots porteurs de l\u2019id\u00e9e sans se pr\u00e9occuper de leur apparence, de leur enchainement facilite la r\u00e9daction.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Choisir les mots qui conviennent m\u00eame s\u2019ils sont d\u2019un niveau soutenu de la langue am\u00e9liore la clart\u00e9.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Composer des phrases compl\u00e8tes, qu\u2019elles soient simples, longues, complexes en commen\u00e7ant par l\u2019id\u00e9e \u00e0 communiquer en accroit l\u2019impact.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Trouver des synonymes pour \u00e9viter la r\u00e9p\u00e9tition r\u00e9duit la monotonie.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Employer le verbe juste \u00e0 la place d\u2019un auxiliaire ajoute de la pr\u00e9cision.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Conserver le sujet proche de son objet pr\u00e9serve la concentration.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Utiliser un seul verbe au lieu de deux \u00f4te des h\u00e9sitations, dynamise le texte.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Doubler les adjectifs m\u00e8ne \u00e0 une inutile surench\u00e8re, au pl\u00e9onasme in\u00e9l\u00e9gant.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 User avec parcimonie de la virgule minimise les ruptures dans la lecture.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Employer le point-virgule introduit une explication compl\u00e9mentaire.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Les marqueurs de relation brisent la coh\u00e9sion; en utiliser peu, dans ce cas accoler le marqueur au verbe; par exemple \u00ab\u00a0on obtiendra par cons\u00e9quent\u00a0\u00bb plut\u00f4t que \u00ab\u00a0par cons\u00e9quent, on obtiendra\u00a0\u00bb.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Soigner l\u2019orthographe, la grammaire, les conjugaisons (au pr\u00e9sent, au pass\u00e9 compos\u00e9, au futur) garde l\u2019attention du lecteur sur le fond.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Relire une premi\u00e8re fois pour r\u00e9viser son message. Relire une seconde fois pour corriger son message.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Abuser du logiciel Antidote (deux fois plut\u00f4t qu\u2019une) facilite ce rehaussement.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 S\u00e9lectionner un seul jeu de caract\u00e8res (noirs, lisibles) de onze ou douze points facilite la lecture.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 La surabondance d\u2019effets de style, les enjolivures d\u00e9parent le texte.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014\u00a0Utiliser avec parcimonie les marqueurs d\u2019attention, \u00e9viter de les doubler (gras\u00a0<b><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">et<\/span><\/b>\u00a0soulign\u00e9).<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Les marqueurs d\u2019attention servent de points d\u2019orgue; tels que le gras pour l\u2019emphase, l\u2019italique pour\u00a0les citations et les mots en langue \u00e9trang\u00e8re, le soulignement pour les adresses de courriel ou de sites internet, la couleur, les petites majuscules.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Omettre le surnombre de points d\u2019exclamations, de points d\u2019interrogation, de points de suspension, les mots tout en majuscules donne de la sobri\u00e9t\u00e9.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Choisir un caract\u00e8re discret pour la puce met l\u2019accent sur la liste.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Garder ensemble le titre et son paragraphe ou la phrase d\u2019\u00e9num\u00e9ration et sa liste \u00e0 puces augmente la coh\u00e9sion visuelle.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014\u00a0Le corps du texte raisonn\u00e9 est usuellement align\u00e9 contre la marge gauche.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Certains pr\u00e9f\u00e8rent un texte align\u00e9 \u00e0 gauche et \u00e0 droite (texte justifi\u00e9), mais les portions d\u2019espaces ajout\u00e9es par le logiciel pour ce faire nuisent \u00e0 la fluidit\u00e9 de la lecture.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Pour mettre en lumi\u00e8re le propos, le lecteur, le professeur (ou le directeur), le r\u00e9dacteur demeurent implicites.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014 Exposer, analyser, raisonner sur des faits av\u00e9r\u00e9s, des informations v\u00e9rifi\u00e9es, des hypoth\u00e8ses plausibles.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: verdana, geneva; font-size: 16px;\"><span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2014Le plaisir de lire. 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